Susan woke up on April 4,2010. Drowsily she walked down the stairs in her bunny P.J. and slippers. She slipped into a chair and poured some Bunny Crunch into her bowl. "Good morning Susan" said her mom. "You forgot a spoon dear." "I know" said Susan. "Lacy, Allie , and Chad dear are already in the car." "Why are they in the car"? "You know it's the Easter egg hunt." Oh Yeah. I don't want to go." "You have to go." said my mom. "All right" I said while I finished my breakfast.
After that I got my Easter basket , put my clothes on , and hurled myself into the car. After a have hour drive we were there. I saw my friend Tommy Bob but I didn't talk to him. We were 20 min. early so we just talked with friends that we knew that happened to be there. During the long 20 min. I decided to play a trick on Tommy Bob. I followed him around a while and then I made a loud screeching noise and ran away. Tommy Bob whirled around and yelled really loud..."Who was following me behind my back!" I couldn't help letting out a giggle. Luckily he didn't hear me giggle.
After that the loud speaker announced that the Easter egg hunt would start in 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...0ooooooooo. Susan departed into the trees. She knew that surely some eggs were hidden in the trees. Just than the loud speaker announced there is one big milk chocolate bunny hidden.whoever finds this will receive a prize and will get to keep the chocolate bunny. Right when Susan heard this she wanted that chocolate bunny. She ran to a tree with a hollow enter.She knew it was hollow because when she was little she punched the tree and it made hole and she could see deep inside it. There there there was the chocolate bunny.
Susan ran to her mom. Mom...Mom...Mom I found the chocolate bunny! "Go show the man in the plaid shirt he'll show you what the prize is and rap up the chocolate bunny." On my way to the man with the plaid coat I saw a little girl at the age of 2 crying. Then I saw a mom trying to get the girl to stop crying. I instantly knew why the girl was crying. She had know eggs.
I walked up to them and I gave the little girl the chocolate bunny. The mom said "Oh you don't need to give us this there's lots of eggs left." "No there's not. Tommy Bob took the last egg. So please except this." The woman thanked me and left to get the prize. I felt good after that.
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Hey Myra I heard that this is your new blog. Your dad told me about it tonight. It is way cool. I love the story. I'm going to tell grandma about it when I get home. I am really enjoying your dad. You are a luck girl to have such great parents.
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ReplyDeleteGood writing. Keep writing more and more stories, because that is how writers become famous. They write about lots of things and different ideas. You have great spelling skills also. You are a very creative person. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteMyra, I'm so glad you have a blog now too! I look forward to reading more of your stories. Happy Easter and Happy birthday too! (on Sunday)
ReplyDeleteMyra I really loved your story and am very impressed. I like how even though Susan really wanted the chocolate bunny, she thought of someone else's needs instead. What a special girl! I think you are probably like her. Thank you for sharing this.
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